Talking about changes… XD
While cleaning my uncleanable room, i found a really scary old folder with first pages of Boku no Kenshisha aka Guardian angel under my bed XD That was a real trauma XDDDD Following pics are the same first two pages of this comic. I dont like to change panles when in my opinion they are not bad, so panels are almost the same but… well, lemme show you:
That was made a year + ago:

That was made in less than a year:

That was made in less than a month XD :

Hope you can tell the dieference XDDDDD ;




December 4th, 2006 at 8:59 pm
I can see the diferences, they are very obvious and man, your style grown so much it’s incredible!
December 4th, 2006 at 10:01 pm
ahhhh too much beautiful artwork, its too much.
I can’t believe how much you’ve improved since your first example. I seriously wish I could be half as good as you were back then. But now I’m even more looking forward to GA!!!!
December 4th, 2006 at 10:47 pm
Barely, but the first one really looks old, technically speaking. Your paneling has become better ^_^ but your style remains in a sort of way… hehehe, which is good!
December 5th, 2006 at 12:03 am
akito: i think that drawing something what is going to be published, unlike something that is just shown online motivates liek shota p0rn in the morning to get u up from bed ~*o*=
Simeon: i really cant get used to it’s new english title 8D sounds so ghay haha ~ well thank you very much *heart*~ Draw on lessonz and you’ll improve fast *A* One bad side of it is worse marks but who cares if you can pwn everyone on final egzam XD
Lara: oh my gawd that barely scared meXD but i read forward and i could breath again haha XD Before short haired semish boy had no particular design @3@ So in further pages his design changed and that was confusing. it was about time to do something with it lol :3 Still must practice more about perspective and dynamics (must practice this one on secks fufufu 8D ) dynamic uke entering or smthing XD *heart*
December 5th, 2006 at 2:53 am
Wow. Even though the character designs have changed a little bit (especially the SD), I am with Lara the layout paneling has really developed over time. The layout looks very active in all three but as you slightly alter the point of view more of the story could be seen through the art. These three samples side by side like this really shows how a different angle or even a different sized panel can change a story.
Thanks for posting this.
December 5th, 2006 at 5:16 am
OMG, that’s so cool! *___* I really think that the flow of the story improved a lot since the first to the latest version. Also, Niwa is so much hotter to me now. ~D8
December 5th, 2006 at 11:30 pm
ed: thank you very much *heart* i’ll do my best to improve even more then X3
dry: haha, maybeXd one thing i am sure is that he got some more brains XDDDD *hugs*
December 6th, 2006 at 7:42 am
aaah~~~ I can deffently see the difference!! Wow so good! Deffinite improvements to the panels and inking *___*) I cant wait to get get a copy of RUSH to read this *chuus*
December 6th, 2006 at 7:31 pm
awh arekuuuu *rapage* XD
dzien dobry my dear hun~must get on msn someday so i can molest ya *o*-
thankss *heartz*